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The Omega’s Gym Alpha Secret Baby: M/M Omegaverse Non-shifter MPREG Romance
£2.80
From gym crush to unexpected fatherhood: can love conquer all in this steamy and heart-warming MPREG romance?
When James joins the local gym, he never expects to meet Ryan, a sexy as sin alpha and personal trainer who is immediately attracted to him.
James is a timid and unconfident omega, but with Ryan’s help, he builds confidence in his own body.
As their friendship deepens, they fall in love, but their happily ever after is put to the test when James discovers he’s pregnant with Ryan’s child.
Just as James is about to tell Ryan the news, he makes a shocking discovery about Ryan that threatens to tear them apart.
Can their love conquer all in this heart-warming romance?
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Additional information
| Language | English |
|---|---|
| File size | 1641 KB |
| Text-to-Speech | Enabled |
| Screen Reader | Supported |
| Enhanced typesetting | Enabled |
| X-Ray | Not Enabled |
| Word Wise | Enabled |
| Sticky notes | On Kindle Scribe |
| Print length | 77 pages |
by Kindle Customer
I have read this novella via Kindle Unlimited.
I have been very vocal in stating how short stories can be just as entertaining as the longer books, unfortunately, I read this book which goes against everything I have said about the short stories.
The author has no understanding of time and has things happen in a few days but then infers that it’s weeks.
Ryan – alpha – personal trainer and stripper. Manipulator and liar.
James – omega – consistently being treated like Cinder’s by his colleagues who don’t like James.
Ryan lies to James on several occasions. The last of which is his second “job”. James is always accepting and justifying Ryan’s lies, even when he catches Ryan in the act of his second “job”.
Ryan quits his second job but agrees to do one more night a few days after.
Yet the author then has Ryan and James date further, go out and celebrate James’ promotion, James discovers he’s pregnant and “ghosting” Ryan for a couple of days, before James catches Ryan in his second job. Also Ryan works his second job every night, even though Ryan doesn’t work between the night he quits to the last night he agrees to work.
The author then tries to raise the angst by having James unable to tell Ryan of his pregnancy!
Overall, I think the author didn’t know where to go with the storyline, and struggled with character and plot creating.
The story feels rushed, underdeveloped, and no concept of time. It comes across as very sloppy and amateurish.